A little girl liked a little boy very much because he was round and smiley and he crawled everywhere. This little boy was much smaller than the little girl.
He always came to the park with his mother when the little girl came to the park with her mother. But while the little girl walked to the park like a big person, like her mother and like the other mother, the little boy sat in his carriage and he smiled a lot, but he never walked because he was still too small to walk. In fact, he was too small to walk, and too small to talk, but the little girl liked to talk to him anyway.
Sometimes the little boy’s mother would take him out of the carriage and put him on the grass and the little boy would crawl and fall onto his stomach, then lift himself up, smile, crawl some more, and fall onto his stomach again. And all this time the little girl’s mother and the little boy’s mother would be speaking to each other. And at the same time, the little girl would be speaking to the little boy.
The little girl told the little boy while he was crawling about how one day he would be big like her, and he would be able to walk like her, and he would be able to eat food with his hands, and even with a spoon and a fork, and he would be able to sit with the big people at the big table. And the little boy crawled.
The little girl told him how one day he would be able to look at her with his eyes and say something to her and how she would understand him and she would say something back to him. And the little boy crawled.
One day, the little girl told him how in the future when he grew up very big that she would be very big also and that then they could be married because he would be a daddy and she would be a mommy and they could have little boys and little girls who would crawl all the time and the girls could wear pink dresses and the boys could wear blue overalls. But while she was telling him this, the little boy fell onto his stomach, and he said “agg! garrr!†And the little girl smiled and said to him again, in case he didn’t hear, “That’s right, blue overalls.†Then she went back to her mother, and she took her mother’s hand and they walked home.
Thomas Edison on overalls. :)
“Opportunity is missed by most people because it is dressed in overalls and looks like work.”
– Thomas Edison
Very cute story, and a great Thomas Edison quote! At first I thought it was Mark Twain (I get the mixed up sometimes), but then I thought about it and figured he might take the opposite position. But he would SAY it well, with a humorous twang.
The story was like the opening of a movie!!! I could see it very clearly. I’m dyin’ to know what the next scene would be!
That’s so interesting, Dave. I often write just one scene, and I’ve had comments before, “write a book from this.” Somehow, I really enjoy the short story format. But now that you mention it, it might be a neat thing to consider expanding the above. Merci.